Teacher Feedback

Front Cover - Add bar code, date/issues no, price. sort out image - head looks to chopped. Spacing need adjusting - too much white space. New images are much better - consider replacing

Contents - needs more pictures. Go back to your research - it doesn't look conventional. Tie in pics from front cover and double page spread

Double page spread - looks good - best piece. Improve/tidy up cutting. Heading needs enlarging and fill spaces (adjust text)

* Create a house style through colour/font which runs through 3 pieces.

Research/Planning level: 3
Practical Draft: 2/3